Unexpected+Visitor+Keiya

Keiya~You did such a nice job describing your visit with your PopPop. It reminded me of just how much I miss my dad. My dad also loved Captain Cats' and an ice cold beer, so maybe they are sharing a nice dinner together. Don't forget to proofread for spelling and punctuation. GRADE=95%

My unexpected visitor would be my Pop- pop. He passed away this memorial day and my whole family is still grieving over the loss. We would have never predicted that he would pass away at age 65. I miss him very much. I would like to see him one last time since he died on vacation. I would ask him about how the beginning of his vacation was because he died about half way through the vacation. I would also ask him all about his life. I didn't know everyting about him so then I would know him better. We would go to Captain Cats and get something to eat there because he loved to eat there. I'd also get him a beer because he always enjoyed an ice cold beer. He loved Captain Cats and he loved beer, so that is where I would bring him and what I would serve him. Our activities together would be to go to his gym, LA Fitness. He went to the gym almost everyday of the week. We would also go bowling. He bowled on a team every Wednesday night. We would also hangout in the downstairs of him and my Gramma's house because he always hung out and watched TV down their. To prove to my family that my Pop-pop visited me, I would take pictures with my camera. If he didn't show in the picture, then I would ask him for his favorite pen. It was a pen that had many different colors to it. We burried his pen in his hands with him.